Tuesday, October 10, 2006

i can see God

I Can See God

I see God as a mighty moose,
lumbering lazily across the strewn, brown leaves
that make the forest floor.

I see God in the warmth of friendship,
reassuring myself that I am not alone
when I travel through extreme troubles.

I see God in the form of the sweltering, hot sun,
giving us the beautiful light
and the joy we need.

I see God in the form of a large, loving heart,
happily filling ours with joy.

I see God in the peace our great world can offer,
peace that others crave and desire,
the peace that allows us to be free.

this is the first poem that my ten-year old nephew, EJ, wrote. kumusta ang vocab! how many ten year olds know what "sweltering" means?? at may nalalaman pa siyang extreme troubles! =) i think he should keep writing! =)

3 Comments:

Blogger Mia B. said...

WOW!!!! :)

what a cutie.

10/12/2006 12:53 AM  
Blogger Lady San Pedro said...

WOW!!!

(Exactly like Mia's comment)

Den, leave the child alone. Hahaha

1/29/2007 12:08 PM  
Blogger chin said...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh my god i love this comments page!!! hahahaha i wish i saw it earlier!!! =)

2/27/2007 8:35 AM  

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